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A DECENT CV....BUT GETTING NOWHERE !
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ibby7
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 11:17 pm    Post subject: A DECENT CV....BUT GETTING NOWHERE ! Reply with quote

NEED YOUR HONEST FEEDBACK TO IRON OUT THE B.S ....THANK YOU


Name
D.O.B: 02 August 19
-----------------------Street,
Liverpool, Merseyside,
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077777777777
123456789@hotmail.com

Personal Profile

My career objective is to study at the _____________, I want to be able to use my considerable technical skills and make a significant contribution in a professional environment such as that of the _______. I am a quick learner, a good team player and a strong self-starter.
My inspiring experience of studying _______ to date has made me strongly determined to obtain a good level of knowledge, and hopefully will be represented by obtaining a degree in _______.

Competencies

Strong analytical and problem-solving skills.
Ability to listen to and execute orders precisely.
Willingness to learn and adapt to changes.


Education & Qualification

• Liverpool Community College ( 2003-2007 )

City & Guilds Carpentry and Joinery NVQ Level 2
City & Guilds/CITB Technical Certificate
BTEC First Diploma in Sport Science
Construction Skills Certification Scheme (CSCS Health & Safety Card)

• New Heys CCS ( 1997-2002 ) GCSE RESULTS:

English (Lit / Spoken) C / D
Mathematics D
Science D
IT C

• Young Managers Project Award ( Johnson Controls )
• 2 x Gem ( Going the Extra Mile ) Awards ( Alliance & Leicester )
• Key Skills Level 1 in Information Technology


Personal Details
Full UK Driving License (Clean), IT Skills, Non Smoker, Keen sports player, Interested in Horology (Watches), Bi-Lingual in English and Arabic (currently studying French).


Work Experience

(Current since July 2006)

Specialist Joinery Solutions
The company that I now work for have been commissioned to supply manufactured furniture to a flagship development for social housing in Manchester. This project is complex and requires constant co-ordination of a variety of manufactured units with strict delivery dates and quality control issues. Since the beginning of my apprenticeship I have been on this project, with a selected team. I have also spent time in the workshop turning out some high quality bespoke pieces of furniture for clients, working on site and fitting out some nice bars around the city. In this job team work, communication, health & safety, machine and hand tool skills are tested daily. The hours I work are sometimes unsociable as some clients have a strict deadline to open, and this may require us to work throughout the night, which I have become accustomed to. This level of commitment leads me to believe I am able to cope with pressures of learning and earning my trade.


(Nov 2005 – June 2006)

Redgraves Raw Recruits - ITV 4
I was part of Sir Steve Redgrave’s Liverpool 8. The aim of the project was to train 8 young men in the technical sport of rowing so that we could compete in the qualifying races for Henley Royal Regatta – Britain’s most prestigious rowing event. I exceeded even my own expectations by making it through the hundreds hopefuls in the selection stages to become the bow man for the 8-man boat. This is an extremely important position in the boat and requires a variety of skills. Not only must the bow man be the best technically, but he must finely adjust the balance whilst the boat is level and in motion. I needed to communicate with the crew and provide feedback, whilst maintaining a constant rhythm. I knew it was a natural role for me, and over the 7 month period of intense and full time training I managed to beat other competitors and firmly established myself as a strong contender for the seat. My ability to understand, positive attitude and the esteem in which I was held by the Olympian Sir Steve Redgrave and other team members speaks volumes - not only about my athletic abilities, but perhaps more importantly my latent ability to improve myself and to encourage others around me. In addition, I was presented with a personal reference from Sir Steve Redgrave. More information is readily available online about the programme.

(Part-Time Christmas Temp 2005)

Argos Superstore – Responsible for the physical receipt of production material in and out of the warehouse. Maintain inventory accuracy and quality records using data entry software. Storing and shipping products appropriately in a controlled environment.

(Aug 2002-2003)

In the Summer Holidays, I went to visit family in the country of Qatar. There my Uncle is the manager of a Police Sports Centre for the district of Mesaieed, where we lived. He would let me volunteer to assist with his duties. The duties given to me where to referee football games, wash the teams’ kit, clean the premises and cut the grass.


Last edited by ibby7 on Mon Sep 08, 2008 8:47 pm; edited 1 time in total
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lexa10881
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Joined: 24 Mar 2007
Posts: 1787
Career Advice: +1/-0
Location: Ohio

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 3:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I dkimmed it and noticed some grammaticals [like smaller numbers typically get spelled out rather than written in numerical form] and other than that, not bad. Refer to this article on how to improve your CV, maybe it can be of use to you. I did not find it to be that bad at all.

http://www.cvtips.com/improve_CV.html
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